We created a story about 'Piorella' and his 3 evil stepbrothers; 'Baicenrella', ' Yuanrella' and 'Hakimrella'.
In a twisted tale, to get an opportunity to meet the adorable Princess Farhani, Piorella tries in vain. Until Fairy Debra waves her wand and a magical Ferrari appears!
Piorella enjoys the ball but alas the Ferrari was to be returned at 9 p.m! Piorella left in a haste and left his broken spectacles behind..... Princess Farhani and her messengers searched high and low and finally spotted Piorella washing the toilet walls... :)
We were learning to
- Create a fractured fairy tale
- Replace characters, change genders and personalities
- Change the setting of the story to a more current one.
Looking forward to reading your own version of 'Cinderella' . I had an enjoyable session with you today!
Tell me how you felt about the lesson! Publish your rhyme too!
Cheers
Mrs Sidhu
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45 comments:
I want a skirt! I want to be queen!
Cool glasses and a diamond ring!
Nice shoes too, just a pair
And a funny car, the colour of a pear!
Eve
Just then a whiff of Glide ( the fragrance spray),
The Magic fairy flew in delight,
Her magic wand went woosh and whissh
“Lily!” she cried, “ Come let’s do the twist!” Ummi
Within a second, Ping
Was married to a King!
Who gave her a diamond ring
To make her sing!
Iasmin
“ Try this instead!” the princess hissed.
She kicked the head off the man
Which went crashing to the floor
It bounced around and rolled on the floor
Jun Liang
“ Off with her eyes! The prince roared back.
He took them off with one big whack.
That pleased the prince and he stopped his lies.
“ She’s prettier without her eyes!”
Sufi
Just then, all in a strike of lightning,
The hairy fairy made it frightening,
Her crooked stick looked like an umbrella
“Oh no!” she cried, Cindy has turned her into chickenrella!
Hafila
I want a T-shirt! I want a shoe!
And a bubble gum for me to chew!
Also a pair of diamond heels.
Which hopefully don’t meet a banana peel!
Zuhud
Hahah so funny
The prince grabbed her hair to hold her back,
Her hair was ripped from head to shoulder,she ran out in bald hair.
AngelaLwin
so magical and so funny.I wish the fairy will also come to me
Yuan Yichun
We learnt about how to make a poem that rhyme.
Zuhud
I think the lesson is interesting and funny, I enjoyed the lesson very much.
I also learnt how to create funny rhymes!:)
It was so funny
Hakim :)
I think the lesson is interesting and funny, I enjoyed the lesson very much.
I also learnt how to create funny rhymes!:)
Nady yang
This lesson is very interesting.
Celine Tan
This is soooooooo funny
PIO TEnza
The lesson is violent and funny!It is olso interesting and i have learnt how to make poems!:)
Ummi
I wish the fairy will give me a big amount of money
Yuan Yichun
This story is halirous and intresting ^-^.I like it.
ZHANG JIPENG
it was so hilarious
Zongxiang
Very creative and funny.
Mary
I think the lesson is very interesting and fun.
yuming
very fun.
Bai Cen
This story is very funy and it is about not our personality so.. nice XD -Eunice
It's very funny
I like the story
and make me happy
Farhani,
ewww! so revolting!haha!sooooooooooo,amasing
sufi
This lesson is very intresting.i also learn that there are many more rhymes i could go and make it. Gratiae Chan
This lesson is very hilarious as well as violent.
Bonnie Boon
Amazing lesson!
Si Yu
It was a riot.yaseer
It was so hilarious
Davesh
Good comments everyone!
sufi:)
Eugene said:
So funny
I can die of laughter watching the video
Aziz
LIM CHENG KHEE
I think that the lesson was fun and interesting, i also enjoy it.I learned how to create funny ryhymes. I have also learned how to rhymes words.
Debra Lim
It was very hilarous.Jun Liang
Leong yuan said....
this story is so funny.
I also want a car and money $$$
Yuan Yichun
Haha very hilarious.yaseer
Very interesting
kah lok
Very funny
Jia xiang
I like ummi's and hafila's rhyeme!
Sufi:)
i wonder what will happen if piorella gets her head chop out
Yeah me too...i also wonder what will happen if PIORELLA's head was cut off!
Ummi :)
its very funny
Yuan Yichun
i can't stop laughing!:p
sufi
I love the lesson.....Thanks for teaching us Mrs Sidhu!!
Iasmin Shereen
I hear lots of rhyme that i almost say it every time.
Mary
Yeah me too!I am beginning to love rhymes!Thanks for teaching!
Ummi
The lesson is very funny
-Dorothy-:)
agree wif dorothy the lesson is really funny:)
Gratiae Chan
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